What I liked What confused me Suggestions I liked that it was suspenseful and interesting to watch. I like that the story eventually came together. Originally, I was confused about why there was a video of the plane, but the ending where the character went off walking toward a plane connected everything together. I was confused during the first few seconds of the opening until I realized the person filming was on a plane. The angle of the plane confused me at first, but I eventually realized what I was looking at. I thought the plot was really interesting! It could have been a little bit more fluent, but I think it leaves just enough to the audiences imagination. This would definitely be a great opening for a movie. I liked the opening airplane takeoff. It seemed like a valid video to insert the names of actors. The robbery itself was kind of confusing just because it was too straightforward and everyone was screaming over eachother. Make the robbe...